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Shifting Moments: on hiatus due to complications by venus-eclipse Shifting Moments: on hiatus due to complications by venus-eclipse
Received a ton of critique to use for Princess of Ruin.
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:iconmarimbwm:

It's a very beautiful work! Figures are drawn well and coloring is awesome!

One thing I'll point out is the guy's chin; It's good, but I think it would be better if he had it slightly circular. Current one is also good, but I think it would improve the art to better.

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:iconjenniferiszelda1:
How do you start playing it? :/
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venus-eclipse May 27, 2013   Digital Artist
It's still early in development.
Although this one is on hiatus since I'm working on another one.
I'm going to use Tumblr to put all the new development posts since DA is usually where I upload finished art only.

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AyameJay Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist
I like it~ Very well detailed, the background is beautiful.
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venus-eclipse Feb 27, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you. =)
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TheKeeper81 Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Overall, I find it to be quite lovely. However, if you're looking to add some minor improvements, you may want to relieve the stiffness in both of their postures. For example, the boy could stand to have a bit more bend to the waist, with maybe a bit of curve to the back. Is his other arm around her? Maybe show more of a bend in that arm, with hand/fingers seen curving around her waist. Maybe arch his neck down, a bit, too. In the same vein, you can put a bit of a back arch to the girl's neck, angle the head a bit, maybe a bit more bend at the waist and upper back. Their hair could use a little bit more movement, as well.
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venus-eclipse Jan 28, 2013   Digital Artist
Thanks, hmm. I think I might be able to fix a few things from this that doesn't require redrawing and colouring things.
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Hysteria-Alice Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
IT'S AKITO!!! IT'S AKITO!!!! FROM FRUITS BASKET! O.O
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venus-eclipse Jan 26, 2013   Digital Artist
Oh no!!! Now that you mentioned it, it's stuck in my brain. ^_^
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Hysteria-Alice Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
lol! that just HAD to be said! XD sorry! But it WOULD be interesting to date Akito.

-SPOILERS-

Except....Akito is originally a girl! In the manga! There's more after episode 26! Trust me!
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