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Shifting Moments: Abandoned due to complications by venus-eclipse Shifting Moments: Abandoned due to complications by venus-eclipse
Received a ton of critique to use for Princess of Ruin. Thanks!
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MarimBWM Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013

It's a very beautiful work! Figures are drawn well and coloring is awesome!

One thing I'll point out is the guy's chin; It's good, but I think it would be better if he had it slightly circular. Current one is also good, but I think it would improve the art to better.

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JenniferIsZelda1 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
How do you start playing it? :/
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner May 27, 2013   Digital Artist
It's still early in development.
Although this one is on hiatus since I'm working on another one.
I'm going to use Tumblr to put all the new development posts since DA is usually where I upload finished art only.

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AyameJay Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist
I like it~ Very well detailed, the background is beautiful.
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you. =)
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TheKeeper81 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Overall, I find it to be quite lovely. However, if you're looking to add some minor improvements, you may want to relieve the stiffness in both of their postures. For example, the boy could stand to have a bit more bend to the waist, with maybe a bit of curve to the back. Is his other arm around her? Maybe show more of a bend in that arm, with hand/fingers seen curving around her waist. Maybe arch his neck down, a bit, too. In the same vein, you can put a bit of a back arch to the girl's neck, angle the head a bit, maybe a bit more bend at the waist and upper back. Their hair could use a little bit more movement, as well.
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   Digital Artist
Thanks, hmm. I think I might be able to fix a few things from this that doesn't require redrawing and colouring things.
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Hysteria-Alice Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IT'S AKITO!!! IT'S AKITO!!!! FROM FRUITS BASKET! O.O
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013   Digital Artist
Oh no!!! Now that you mentioned it, it's stuck in my brain. ^_^
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Hysteria-Alice Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol! that just HAD to be said! XD sorry! But it WOULD be interesting to date Akito.

-SPOILERS-

Except....Akito is originally a girl! In the manga! There's more after episode 26! Trust me!
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013   Digital Artist
I'm missing two manga volumes of Fruits Basket before I finish it. (I didn't want to mention Akito being a girl in case you didn't get there. xD).

I'm a big Shigure fan due to the manga. =D
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Hysteria-Alice Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mwahahahaha! OH SHIGURE! that DOG! XD I loved Shigure! he made everything funny!
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Hika-Tsu Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The background is really nice, as well as the logo, but I agree with the others that the guy's eye looks kind of weird. I've played Frozen Essence, and this art is really a huge improvement. Thank you for drawing/making those VNs! :D
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013   Digital Artist
Hmm, I think I fixed it after you took a look. Do you think it's okay now? I already updated the picture.
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xxConniexx Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing work~! I like this one!
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Harukoz Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
huge improvements and I love the pose. I think the eye for the dude is a bit awkward since it looks more like a front perspective than a profile view. I really wish I can color like your drawings though. They always give a radiance and not like how Twilight does it XD
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013   Digital Artist
Thanks. I'll fix stuff on all the data I've gathered. =)
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neneka17 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
The lighting is well done so is the line&color and cannot wait to see the game.I also like the over all imagery it inspires it makes me think of four different types of scenerios.
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013   Digital Artist
What kind of scenarios are you expecting? =)
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angelofstars Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
I feel like the girl's hand is too small. I would make it like bigger, I guess.
And imo, the guy's fingers are a bit too short (Especially the index finger)
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013   Digital Artist
Thanks. Hmm, when I look at the index finger, I'm also missing a thumb. Haha.
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LlikeOaVsinE Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
just a little critque that the girl's chin should be higher up a bit ^^;

cant wait for the new game~! >w<
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013   Digital Artist
Thanks. Just the tip right?
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LlikeOaVsinE Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm?
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StalkingAnarchist Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love the lighting on this artwork :D
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venus-eclipse Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013   Digital Artist
Thanks =D!
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StalkingAnarchist Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem :D
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